[Bloodline] Gengutaika (Illusion Embodiment)

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Name:
Gengutaika
(Illusion Embodiment)

Clan:
Gansaku
(Fake)

Origin:
Unknown

Type:
Kekkei Genkai
(Bloodline Limit)

Specialty:
Genjutsu
(Illusion Techniques)

Description:
Gengutaika, also known as Illusion Embodiment, is an extremely rare Kekkei Genkai that only few beings possess. Gengutaika is so rare that many people believe its existence to be a rumor. Due to a genetic anomaly, that alters the cerebral nervous system by overwhelming it with spiritual energy, Gengutaika turns its user into a living illusion (composed of only spiritual energy). Gengutaika has pro and cons that are dangerous to the opponent and user.

The pros of Gengutaika are phenomenal. When activated, Gengutaika emits a barrier of spiritual energy with the user at its center; unable to be penetrated by anything lacking physical energy. The barrier is 20 meters in all aspects (diameter, height, width, etc.). With the exception of the user, those who enter this barrier are embedded with spiritual energy that attacks their cerebral nervous system, and causes psychosomatic disruption. Once psychosomatic disruption occurs, any illusion created by the user can cause real damage to the being affected.

Due to the user becoming a living illusion, their body becomes intangible. Being intangible, the user becomes unable to be hit by anything except Ninjutsu and Fūinjutsu. Lastly, Gengutaika causes the user to awaken three unique traits: Illusion Awareness, Illusion Immunity, and Illusion Manifestation. With Illusion Awareness, the user is able to detect when a Genjutsu is being used. With Illusion Immunity, the user is unable to be affected by Genjutsu. With Illusion Manifestation, the user can create any type of illusion within the spiritual barrier surrounding them.

The cons of Gengutaika are disastrous. Once Gengutaika is activated, it cannot be deactivated until the user runs out of chakra or is knocked out. Gengutaika constantly and rapidly uses the user's chakra to sustain their illusionary form and the spiritual barrier. All illusions created using Gengutaika require double the amount of chakra it would usually require (based on technique ranks). Despite, and due to, being a living illusion, the user of Gengutaika can still be affected by Ninjutsu and Fūinjutsu. The user of Gengutaika is fatally weak against techniques that absorb chakra.

The user of Gengutaika will unable to use Taijutsu and Bukijutsu until they materialize. The user of Gengutaika automatically materializes every 5 minutes for 5 minutes (every other post). Finally, any Genjutsu affecting those who escape the spiritual barrier are immediately dispelled. Long range fighters and techniques are best suited to fight anybody using Gengutaika.

Restrictions:

• The user must sacrifice 1 class slot.
• The user can only use Genjutsu, Taijutsu, and Bukijutsu.
• The user must be chaotic evil.

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Hmm, I'm really liking the base idea for this! But there are a few categories from the bloodlimit template that you are missing such as Specialties, Clan Leaders, and Restrictions. Even if these are N/A, or none, still put them in this application -- and one of your restrictions should definitely be sacrificing 1 class slot to join the bloodlimit.

Also you do know that you'll need to create all of the jutsu and abilities for the Gengutaika, so that they are listed and detailed, before they can be used? Did you plan on adding these abilities as techniques later on?

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What do you mean by specialties? This was actually supposed to be a solo bloodline (if possible). I can make it a clan if I have to, though. The restrictions are the cons, unless you wanted me to specify further. I don't mind sacrificing a class slot. I didn't know that I would have to create all of the jutsu and abilities, but that's fine by me. If I could add them later, that would be great.

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The template explains it, but essentially Specialties are just a section for putting down what kind of jutsu (taijutsu, genjutsu, or ninjutsu) that the bloodlimit uses most. Also keep in mind that genjutsu customs are currently closed at the moment (although doesn't matter if you're adding the techs later).

And yeah, so the cons you've got are really for your jutsu and abilities. What I'm talking about is the Restrictions for joining the bloodlimit, there just needs to be a section for that. Even if the only restriction is sacrificing the class slot.

And you can def add the techniques later and just get the basics down for now. Will just have to run all of your jutsu through customs later. And what do you mean "solo bloodline"? We do not allow Selfish Creations, so nothing that can be learned by just one person.

[Pwn]

Edited.

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Okay, so as far as your abilities go -- I'll hold off on grading any of that since you will eventually be turning them into jutsu and/or traits. Personally, I think this bloodlimit could really use a trait (for Illusion Awareness, Illusion Immunity, and Illusion Manifestation) but its up to you of course. Also, keep in mind that Genjutsu is currently closed in customs so you'll have to wait if you want to submit anything as genjutsu. Also, keep in mind that Genjutsu is a little different from Ninjutsu, so it will have to fit as an Enhancement-type genjutsu once it is allowed. Just wanted to give you that info for the future as you are building your bloodline.

As far as what we have here -- the only thing that really needs to be fixed is the requirements. So ninja can't start as a missing ninja -- they must join a village and then run away in-character. Since a character has to start with a bloodline, but can't start as a missing ninja, that requirement is a little contradictory.

Also, I see that this bloodline requires the Yin Release. While I do have plans for this in the distant future, currently there is no Yin Release so no one would be able to join :/ Eventually I will be adding "Illusions" to genjutsu -- which will be similar to Releases in Ninjutsu -- so maybe change it so that players must be know at least 1 Illusion?

[Pwn]

Edited.

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Approved~